Hey!! guys good day my name is Ashwin and
I am the PTE Tutor for Aussizz PTE Parramatta. Now,
If you in to my previous life video I
did tell you guys about a few tips and
tricks regarding the writings module in
the PTE Academic exam now i'd also
remember saying this your writing will
be better if you do apply practice which
basically means that the more you write
the better you will be added in the exam
so i decided to actually put that in
practice so here i am today to explain
to you and perhaps work out an example
in front of you on how to tackle the
summarize Written text some tasks in the PTE writing module now you guys might see
me move in and out of the screen a bit
because I'm controlling my slides just
to give you guys a whole lot of
explanation on how you can easily
compact this activity. Okay!! Alright guys
Now,  summarize Written texts is where you
will get an enormous passage right so
when I say enormous don't take me wrong
it's really big trust me you have a lot
of information a lot of description a
lot of example a lot of names and your
task is to actually give a very succinct
form of writing okay. Now, when I say
succinct form of writing my studio
often ask me how many words am I
supposed to write? or how many tasks do I
get? now you get two to three tasks for
the exam in respect to summarize written
text and trust me guys when I went for
my exam when I gave my exam for the PTE
I actually did not know how to do this
activity until the time I went and I got
my question so it's in during the exam
and I got my question I realized wait I
can actually just stay in the topic
sentences and frame an answer makes much
sense so that's what I'm going to teach
you guys today how to find that
necessary information and how to word it
correctly so that your writing is
graceful and you give a good answer for
the summarise written text so coming back
to my question how many words do you
write for summarise written text  now
basically PTE has given you a sort of
Liberty to write around 5 to 75 words
now we've striped it down mainly because
of the reason once you write more than
50 words your answer becomes a bit tacky
it becomes really complex because if
you're writing a long answer it's sure
that you will read a lot of mistakes
because the main agenda is that you
write only one sentence other for any
normal
so when I say you write one sentence I
need that you only put a full-stop at
the very end of the sentence as you're
right so how will you write the signal
please information or how do you can
then such a large passage to simply base
information simple to use commas use
something called as conjunctions and you
sue something called as connecting words
now what are conjunctions guys
conjunctions can be easily remembered by
remembering the acronym fanboys the
fanboys are basically "for" "and" "not" "but" "or"
"yet" and "so"
so these seven guys are required to give
an a static sense to your answer and to
connect different sentences together so
that you ensure that you don't put too
many corners now when you skim read the
passage or if you read the whole passage
you often realize that there are a lot
of ideas that comes in sometimes they
might start with an agreement and when
they reach the conclusion they might
give you a contradiction now in those
cases it is your task to actually link
two contradicting sentences so for that
to use connecting words now there are
your connecting words even though unless
despite although although more
furthermore therefore because but for
PTE saying let's keep it simple let's
just try to use however with that add or
information in a passage and oh sorry
however when they contradict and
information on the passage and more
they add more information on a passage
so I believe I can do a much better job
of explaining this to you guys if I
actually load a question onto the screen
so without much further you let me
introduce to you lose due to this
monster passage so at first look guys
yes I know that you asked it because
this is awfully a lot of written
information right this is huge
and trust me I can scroll down on this
screen there you go that's a good
passage and your task is to make this
into one sentence so how do you do that
let's just start reading the first line
at the transition of the passage reads
that Most sea creatures, from whales and
dolphins to fish sharks shrimp possibly
even anemones respond to sound and many
can produce it. They use it to hunt and
hide fight mates and food form and guide
shoals, navigate "blind" send messages
transmitted warnings established
territories, warn off competitors, stun
prey, deceive predators, and sense changes
in water conditions. Now that was a
mouthful of information so I can
actually understand two things one
they're actually listed different kinds
of sea creatures when they've actually
said dolphins - fish - sharks - shrimps
and when they actually the second
sentence tells you a lot of functions
functions of the sound right they use
some for a lot of these functions so
this is how I am going to condense this
into a very short sentence right most
creatures
I'm just going to today's the whole
thing
use sound
because you don't need to list it as
strings or sharks because the sea
creatures word sums up the whole
categories of three pitches that they
are now the different functions they use
it to hunt and hide find mates form and
food form and guide shows navigate by
now what I can infer from this is that
they use sound to live under the ocean
so that's what I'm going to do alright
so I am going to erase the whole chunk
and just write to sustain
their lives
undersea
so now that's one huge chunk of a
passage just written in one sentence
okay
now let's go to the next passage.
Marine animals keep click bones and grind teeth;
use drum tight bladders and special sonic
organs to chirp, grunt and boom: beich gases; and vibrate special
organs. Far from 'silent deep'side the oceans
now I'm just going to leave it right
there because the sustain to me
awfully like a lot of descriptions now
this is the major thought guys when you
list down a one sentence summary you're
just writing the main points no
descriptions no examples no specific no
names or anything of that sort that
points after dissolution so I'm just
going to skim you read this passage now
one of the interesting thing is they've
actually said that the throb of
mighty engines as
46,220 large
vessels plough the words shipping lanes.
Scientists say  that the background noise
in the ocean has increased roughly by 15
decibels in the past 50 years. It may not
sound like much in overall terms but it
is enough according to many marine
biologists to mask the normal something
level to business again this is a lot of
information that is
because one thing that I can actually
understand understand here is that
scientists have come to conclusion that
there is a lot of noise that is
generated by other human activities so
that's what I can find from the whole
lot of descriptions that they give in
here so that's what I'm going to do okay
I'm just going to erase all that
I'm just going to write
so that's my second point now this is
what I can understand from that whole
load of description they said that there
is a lot of noise generated because of a
lot of human activities like underwater
shipping lanes and what not so the main
idea is that undersea noise pollution is
on the right or on the rise I'm sorry
now let's go to the last paragraph. Under
sea noise pollution is like the death of
a thousand cuts says Sylvia Earle chief
scientists of the US National Oceanic
and Atmospheric Administration each
sound in itself may not be a matter of
critical concern but taken all together, the
noise from ahipping, seismic surveys, and
millitary activity is creating a totally
different environment then existed even
50 years ago. That high level of noise is
bound to have a heard, sweeping impact on
the life in the sea. Okay!!
so now from this I can actually I could
actually summarize it and say that undersea
noise pollution
is causting a hard
sweetening
impact
on life in the see
so now
what we've done is you actually
summarized three different monstrous
paragraphs into just three lines of
information now this is how I'm going to
combine this into my sentence so that it
makes sense okay now I'm going to use
fat voice so any of these conjunctions
like fall and nor but or yet so and also
I'm going to use some connecting words
so this is how probably I frame my
answer okay so more secrets is use some
to sustain their lives under C and put a
comma space and but
right scientists
are of the opinion that undersea
noise pollution is on thse rise
moreover,
this causes a negative impacts on 
life in the sea. how I'll actually theme that
monster of acara and bought it to just
three sentences
so mostly preachers you start to sustain
their lives on the scene but scientists
are of the opinion that undersea noise
pollution is on the rise moreover this
causes a negative impact on the life in
this sea ever use too much of
conjunctions you know I just used one
conjunction or the fanboys which is but
because I was contradicting it now after
contradicting the science is added by
saying that when you take the noise
pollution together it is actually
causing a lot of impact in the sea now
because they're out on point I have used
more over now I've used the correct
amount of Commerce and this probably
will get me a good score in the PTE now
there are different versions of this
answer that you can come up with but the
main points to make the same this is
what PTE wants you do so instead of
writing a huge complex summary of around
like say fifty or sixty five words
I have written a summary of hardly let's
say let me just count these words
it's infinity around 34 words so that's
how you should receptivity. Now, guys I
have worked out this answer in a notepad
and that's how I want each of you to
practice because I was taking some extra
bit of the time to make sure that I was
not to the best of my knowledge
I haven't made any sort of a spelling
mistake and I was making sure that I
just used one fanboy and what connection
but so that my sentences does not you
know looks tacky and it has a good flow
to it now this is how you do exact each
and every question that you comment so
in this scenario there was very limited
information in the middle paragraph but
the main just of the information that
you needed for the answer was in the
introduction and the conclusion so skip
 to get an idea of what the
passages about arrive at an answer now
if you simply they are pretty sure that
out of the ten minutes that you get for
this activity you will be able to do
this in three to four minutes now use
the rest of the time to skew me the
middle part of the passage to make sure
that you covered all the points that
they need YouTube and just use one
conduction and one connecting word to
give you give a good graceful answer so
this is how you do a summarize written
text activity. So, guys this is all for
today's session now remember always
always do keep practicing because the
more you do the more adept you will be
get doing this activity you will know
where the sentences are that's the only
thing that will stick
of that enormous passage and best of all
if you do practice a lot
no matter without of the question maybe
he will still find an answer thank you
so much for tuning in guys now that's
all for me today now just a reminder
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